darrk, first bar had too many syllables, should of used a filler word with less syllables then put D.C.. 2nd bar was just self glorification, no real punch there. 3rd bar... cyber gun? thats a bit childish in my opinion.. 4th bar didnt even finish and that messed the structure a bit.. 5th bar was more self glorification.. 6th bar was stretched to all shit, and way too much filler.

sniper, first bar was didnt flow amazingly, but it worked, had a an alrite punch (not amazing tho).. the second bar was average, sort of worked, the punch was ok.. 3rd bar i dont no what u ment by (what he says) but the rhyme scheme worked, and there was a punch. the 4th bar was ok again, finished with a decent punch, and the closer was a bit weak.

basically, both of u need to elevate, but sniper won the battle because he just had some punches.. and less self glorification..

return the favor on one of the battles in my sig....

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