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Trajed'ee- your verse would have been better if you had structure that was readable, ur verse lacked hard punches and flow, it was like u just didnt give a shit....try to use personals too, not hate, just being honest
the metaphor-ok this was a lot better, flow and structure wise,nice play off his name and you had some funny disses.....you take this for an overall better verse, but u both need to come harder next time around.............not bad tho
VOTE:the metaphor

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