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Old 07-17-04, 01:24 PM   #7
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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Originally Posted by One-Man-Band
aight

yo ill rip ya curses-n-all, read em, and ya rhymes never-have-shook-me..
drop'd 50 verses-or-more, heard-it-before, kid u just a veteran-rookie..
How noobs-this-kid be, Just like his sig, ill black, blue n bruise-him-swiftly..
get a new-name-quickly, "CapiTol"? howbout "how-to-use-the-shift-key"..

Fuck ya raps, instead Ill straight slay ya middle-ribs-n-head-bitch..
Im not riddled-from-ya-record, i know you only eat little-kids-for-breakfast..
sorry bout this, but i got to be dope, otherwise this fight-'ll-be worse...
Cos if i come wack, all the voters might think i was biting-ya-verse..

This battles a one sided gamble.. no ones even viewin-ya-bet..
an old name like "killah bwoy".. how u gon win if u aint reach puberty-yet?..
I'll Slay-n-kill-ya. punches, flow, whatever, my whole game-is-iller..
forget about ya lines, rhymes n verses.. cos shit, even ya name-is-filler..

Rappin-complex, clappin-wit-techs, spray packets-a-threats.. follow-that..
heres a tip: why not treat it like the vets dicks you suck, n swallow-rap..

if u didnt get some punches... killah bwoy was his old name.. and that black and blue line was referring to the colours of his sig... in case he changes em



your verse was fairly good..but he owned u in strucutre dont put ur lines in that group of four
its highly newbish..his strucutre was better you used better multies and meta4's..but your punches didnt hit hard with an exeption of a few this was a close..but ur weaker punches lost
you this battle..very close proud of both but there has to be on winner..thats state capitol..
overall 16.9/20
my vote:state
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