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Old 07-17-04, 03:04 PM   #20
Tempa
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Dawgfatha_13 - First of all ya first line had nuthin to do with his av. LOL. Most of ya rhymes was basic and u didn't have any good punches. Your closer was iight. keep elevatin...... 5/10

LethalNJection - Ya stucture was good but ya rhyme scheme was a lil off. Ya had some nice punches in there and decent vocab. Nice drop. Overall good spit.....7.5/10

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