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Old 07-17-04, 04:47 PM   #2
GrEnAdE
Banned: Cheating
 
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theres no help in the world for your rhyme DISEASE
ima help if u ask nicely, but take your time PLEASE
first,put a nice simple word at the end of each LINE
if u dnt get wot im sayin...jus try immatating MINE
you see everyone on this site has tried to HELP-YOU
but ur so "slack",..thats why they gotta BELT-YOU
once you got that..u can try MULTISYLABLE WORDS
the trick is to be........."EXTRAVIGILANT"...YA HEARD?
aiight hope that helps,thankyou, im out, i gotta split
oh..dnt try spittin multies...i doubt your any gud at it..
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