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Old 07-17-04, 05:28 PM   #5
E Looch
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ya rainbow font needs to go awayshit is annoyin to read why u aint gettin no feedback

seeu tried for some creativitie and wordplay didnt really feal any of it

rhyme scheme was nice flow was decent

not that good of an open mic though just elevate an work on some better wordplay and drop that color font shit
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