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Old 07-17-04, 06:38 PM   #21
fluidmoon
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kang: u had the overall better verse here,your flow was good from beginning till end and your words were good, you said a lot of words in a limited space,nice wordplay, and your structure was on point too, the opening punch was ur best lines.......
Aznb:u had some decent punches, but your structure was all over the place, some s-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d lines as well, but not a bad verse overall......
VOTE:KANG
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