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Old 07-17-04, 07:02 PM   #13
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-Damagician7.
shoot u in da back of da head ya nose poked out n' ya head throbbin....
1 shot in ya breast will red ya chest u'll look like a robin....
coo flow, aight wordplay, aight punch


-Polifick.
Neva 2 Win A Leauge Times Up On Tha Clock...
Tha Day He Makes a Punchline??
.................When Shaq Make 3point Shot....
average flow, coo wordplay, straight punch


Overall, I think Pol got this. He had wittier wordplay and a better worded punch. Mag, yu had too much of the same word/idea in your verse that wrecked your creativity, like shot/shoot, head and basically made another gun line extrememly obvious. Pol, your structure's really annoying, but I can live with it haha. Maybe add a more complex flow next time mayne. Ya still did aight though.


Vote - Polifick.