yo:
marv
k, u had a better verse dog, ur flow was on point, neva dropped off, u had overall better structure and ur wordplay was ill, all ya punches hit hard too, best lines were the opening lines.....mad funny personals in there as well
k:u need to work on ya structure, but your rhymes were decent, just work on elevatin your flow and ur structure cuz it was kinda all over the place.....
VOTE:MARV