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Old 07-17-04, 08:36 PM   #12
Tempa
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I ain't gonna hate on marx. You tried so it's all good. Lethal is just outta ya league...take yo ass to elevated nigga lol. Lethal had some nice punches, solid structucture, and some iight wordplay. Marx yo structure was iight though a few of ya lines was stretched. Work on lyrics and punches. Good luck in ya next battle.

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