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Old 07-17-04, 09:51 PM   #14
Abraxas
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Guess what, i'm not a newb so i'm rendering your verse fruitless
Cats such a stain on this site, he even makes stain remover useless
GOOD OPENING
Kids stuck in front lines for life never in elevated now he's straight done
Come on this is ain't hop scotch although i'm leavin ya back aT square 1
THIS GOOD BUT I WASNT QUITES GETTIN IT
Trigga's shootin blanks, he's getting killed yall know merk'd at sight
He's only set a mic right, when he was a roadie at Rock the Mic...
i LIKE THIS ENDIN TO YOUR S GOOD VERSE BUT Y AGREE ON ONLY 6 LINES MAN???

your words are sloppy an you get bushed like a patriots clan//
you know you "love the one"...don't dare say ya just a matrix fan//
GOOD START
i'll take your hands an be like cecelia kidnappers to bag ya lids//
an you couldn't spit heat samping the mouth of a dragon kid//
UMM ITS GOOD BUT I DONT UNDERSTAND
im easily brag with this your punches will just stop and shift//
play-toh couldn't land a fucking deal with his label falling off a cliff//
oHH THIS IS TITE THIS IS A GOOD ENDING

I LIKED MARTIX KIDS STRUCTURE AND FLOW BETTER pLAY TOH WAS OKAY IN HIS DISSES BUT IT WASNT AS GOOD AS MATRIX THIS IS A CLOSE BATTLE YET A GAIN BUT I GOTTA HAND IT OVER TO


MATRIX MAN
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...Paramik Fuckin'...


...Owns You!


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