check it:
super:u had a nice flow and you had a nice way with your words, punches were good,u had some raw lines, it was hot..
killa:ur structure was ok, but some of ur lines didnt rhyme,, like the last couple when u were tryin to get ya point across that way, but it was a decent verse overall
VOTE:super

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