Eragance

im tha don of tha site/ saddam of the site/
drop bombs when i write/ got guns when i fight
->>ok opener but battle should be about him not you

im super illy feel me/ super cilious super silly/
i dont fuck around i pop willys on ya feelings/
->>super silly? ehh it was ok

im known for rappin show a lot of arrogance/
suicidal nigga like terrorists put holes in u make u transparent/
->>second line way stretched

the sickest in the business spill a nigga wit the quickness/
never leavin a witness except the niggas givin me applauds/(votes)
->>filler

no point in battlin you just to dump u in the yard/
not that hard not one scar come on super show me somethin/
im gutta u fuck around i put holes in ya stomach
->>decent closer

supercilious

ayo im gone win this battle easy quick wit five votes
cuz this cats rap sounds worse than ja rules high note
->>first punch in this thread

you couldnt hang wit me nigga if i handed you five ropes
i hate niggas that wanna be "erogant" so im lettin my rhymes go
->>filler

ayo you spit garbage juice so i throw trash atcha
and laugh atcha like you in a play wit bad actas
->>i see where this was starting to be a punch but the second line fell off

its bout to be over man prepare ressurection
only why you here cuz i forgot to wear my protection
->>mom jokes are played

i look down on these other mcs man im too tall
i seen you in da source takin a picture wit ru paul
->>wack


I give the battle to supercilious because he had a punch that connected. None of the punches were that great though. Both of you need to keep elevating and work on those "oh shit he buried him" punches. Dont talk about yourself in battles its all about the other person. This sounds like a big list of hate but its not meant like that im jut giving advice. Read the tutorials theres a lot of good shit to help in there.

It wasnt a blow out pretty even but v/supercilious

\/I didn't sleep on yours don't sleep on mine\/

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