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Old 07-17-04, 11:25 PM   #10
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ok pretty close battle punches and flow wise...

complex illness i liked your verse a lil bit more flow's only for the fact that your structure was better than his. ( didn't have the ... after every lines)
overall good battle , good job 2 both
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