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Old 07-17-04, 11:38 PM   #12
fluidmoon
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ok check it:
DARRK:you had a decent verse, your flow was good, but it seemed u felll off a bit at the end,closer didnt rhyme,but decent overall..
SNIPER: you had a good verse, your flow was good, you came harder than darrk, and some of your lines were funny, u definitaly have a style and thats good..
VOTE:SNIPER
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