ok:
lil: ya structure is all over the place, decent punches but need to work on personals, flow needs some work too, but structure can change that.....keep elevatin....1
Big: you had the overall better verse here, you had good punches, flow, and structure,
and some of ya lines were funny, so i gotta give this to you........
VOTE:Big

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