Fluidmoon

Ya must be Mentally Deranged for tryin to battle me,
With a name like that,I "Dare ya to Turn" back, its too easy,
nice opener 6/10

I need a magnifying glass cuz ya punches aren't detectable,
Ya got no flow bro just quit cuz ya shit aint intellectual,
its an ok punch 5/10

Rhymes is lacking punches,so take my advice, brush up on skill,
Cuz i bring sick fluidity with words, damn, mami's too illl,
decent but not that good 3/10

Too young, only 16, ya have no real rappin experience,
So I'll have to merk ya, just so u ya able to handle more of this,
not that good of a closer, 1st line aint that 2nd is 2/10

16/40 not bad decent 40 percent

dareturn

Fluidmoon is bout to look like micheal jackson in thriller
cus i say fuck New york, its da return of the cerial killer
pretty good opener 7/10

this pedaphile still fucking kids, ill make him leave earth
you prefer dicks since you aint never had pussy since birth
ok punch but since she aint a guy it goes down 4/10

the more you act poetic the more pathetic your fuckin shit gets
yo im homophobic, so you dont get credit,i hate battlin faggets
pretty good first line 2 line same as before shes a girl 4/10

your existness in life doest matter nemore since no cares
im relentless to stab this bitch till red covers his hairs
great lines 8/10

this niggas battling out of his league and i didnt show no pity
im done fucking with this fake ass easy e, go back to the city
shes not a girl but ok first line bad closer overall 1/10

23/50 46 ive seen u do better though

vote dareturn