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Old 07-18-04, 12:52 AM   #13
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Da Prodigy


yo/ma flow like wrestling..it keep u pinned//
by da second punch-line u gone need uh second wind..
->>I was really feelin this opener

u beatin me iz far from da truth...
i'll take ya own MixedToxins an burn out uh tooth..
->>weak

ta beat me u gone have ta dig ta ma root..
its either that or u'll be catchin da boot..
->>filler

just face it u'll never make loot from da rap industry..
cuz ya flows 2 played an very distinct 2 me..
->>i dont get the second line

even uh rookie could guess what u'll say next..
just face u'll never have money drugs an sex...
->>its ok

but atleast u can keep the name Mixedtoxins..
all da punchlines u hit wit its like we wuz boxin..
->>???

plus all ya metas an flow stay locked in...
cuz u scared ma punchline uh cave ya whole face in...
->>played but decent

but me.. ma hot lines stay glistinin..
an yours like toilets dey always stay pissed in..
an ma hot shit like bacon in uh pan it stay sizilin....
->>played but decent


miXed ToXinz


Im the dope killa, ima bust you like a 9 mila../
->>so-so

Style Change

Man this game is blated plain saturated./
I dont know how this cat made it, all these herbs must be related./
->>blated? wtf? second line way stretched

You tryin to make yo shit complicated../
Prodigy You need to get your mic hand amputated.. this emcee already faded.../
->>ok...second line way stretched again

Style Change
->>^fuckin annoying^

Nigga please.. this emcee spit and alrdy ran out of words../
Im still spitten predicts, pro-nouns and ad-verbs../
Have you ever copped 4 pounds of white widow from a nerd.?/
->>first two are decent third line doesnt make sense

Style Change

Its fools like you givin the rap a bad name..bitch if you cant handle the real street stay on the bike lane/
Fame is what i got..to bad you aint hot.... flopped a rec deal past up biggie and pac!/
Ima kill you fill you or not faught this battle ill and hot../
->>I like the first line. Second and third line dont make sense


this was really close i thought. mixed you had some good ideas but your style changes really made it hard to read and i wasnt feeling them at all. I liked prodigy's opener a lot. he had the better flow too. neither had good punchlines. keep elevating.

v/da prodigy

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