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Old 07-18-04, 01:35 AM   #7
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Lil' Q


aight my rhymes they gonna kill ya, and leave ya 6 feet under/
or maybe they'll leave u blind like your stevie wonder/
->>weak opener

but nigga yo shit stinks, its like a year old onion/
your more like mickey mouse and my ass would be paul bunyon/
->>its ok

you's a bitch and im gonna win, so that's the truth, aint it?/
im gonna bring you down like you a lame version of a gay titanic/
->>filler + doesnt rhyme

yo this battle aint even worth it, cuz im gonna walk away wit the gold/
cuz im gonna be punchin' holes in yo ass like im punchin morse code/
->>this was a decent punch

speakin of punchin', your punches are too sloppy/
and instead of morse code, ill be punchin you out like rocky/
->>ehh..alright

and why u askin where am i at? , u should hope im not there/
cuz ill start blowin yo ass apart till there aint nothin but fuckin air/
->>pretty good

your from tha streets of NY, im from tha streets of detroit/
i'll rap circles around your ass and have u lost like a lil boi/
->>wasnt feelin it that much...just didnt connect

im gonna whoop you wit 16 lines, cuz nigga i gotta go/
i cant believe yo name's money when all your rhymes are flat broke/
->>this was my favorite part


$$Money$$


dog i can tell by your rhymes you will never be succesfull
I dont think "Lansing" has ever brought anything special
->>ok opener

Damn your so weak,Hold oyur head up,let me smack it
Your rhymes are like a limp dack,they cant hack it
->>weak

Dog,your rhymes are leaving you with no fact of luck
You talk,but its like a 300 pd guy,u cant back it up
->>this was ok

You talk shit like you gonna get the crowd hyped
Bout you get doubts like if u were white with the mic
Damn,i thought fags werent allowed on this site
->>kinda choppy but it was decent...race card is played though

Ima battlin legend fo sure,u dont have to tell me
IMa call you stevie wonder,cuz my skill you cant "see"
Fuckin shittin on peeps,Ill pee on you like the tapes of R-Kelly
->>i was really feelin how you flipped the stevie shit on him r-kelly is played though

Money took this i thought. Lil Q was all filler. You shouldve made it shorter you were way over the minimum but it kinda looked like you ran out of ideas. Its cool though both of you just keep battlin and hit some of my shit up lord knows ive got enough open battles.

v/money

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