EyeDentdy

My rapper is 2 pax resurrection, yes kids he's back/
But look at biggies resurrectin, yes kids, he's on his back/
->>second line kinda stretched but i liked it

Layed out flat, never made it to bitchslaped for chit chat/
couldnt write who he battling...too scared of how voters would act/
so whach me handle him, work around em like Im trying to grow a 6 pack/
->>the first two were cool but the third one didnt connect

Friesh like a big bag of tik taks, so Id wish Ud bite me quickly/
U couldnt flow lyrically, so Peg cities hopes and dreams whent down wit Biggie/
->>second line stretched again but the tic tacs thing was hot

ask diddy, I'll break Ur spine wit swift punchlines to ur skull/
Render U useless cuz beef gets eaten, cooked or raw in a lunch bowl/
->>wtf is a lunch bowl? my least favorite line

Cuz I aint a rapper, Im the gift inside that U work hard to deliva'/
XL, U still aint big enough to take this lyrical rapsody nigga'/
->>pretty good closer

Biggie_XL

this fagget porbally didn;t rite hi own shit ill cahre him for Eyedentyde theft
when im done wit you cuz you know wont if thats you cuz they'll be nutin left
->>second line was 6 kinds of wack and you gotta get spell check

so don't test me bitch cuz ill pull some harcore shit on ya ass brah
are you a lost do you evan know ya onw identidy ill just ask ya
->>not feelin it

when im done wit ya fool you feel like you been popin shit like walter macardy
and get you note book cuz im a skewl ya and bitch don't bt tardy
->>so-so

ill let you see how in verse you life turned you worst
and ill kill ya fagget when my gun burst ill take your life first....
->>first line didnt make sense at all

your dignity will be gone like vanila ice afta his first single
and bitch you just a bugger like beatel how bout i call you rigo
->>i liked this line

cuz i got my arsnel and i got my ritgh hand on ma pistol
and shit im the emcee tha to hard to hanf im a fist full
->>gun talk in a text? played

cuz i treat ya like you one of them g-unit bitches
and you bette not pull a fiddy turn it 2 on of de snitches
->>wack

cuz run tell som body its ya worst day
ill leave wit a scared face and ill kill ya in tha worst way
->>filler

im done And singing out is tha motha Fuckin B-i-g-g-i-e
and now i pul WC and kill ya in tha Killa Cali
->>quit spelling your name out it ruins every line you do it in

no hate but Eyedentdy merked you ...keep elevatin and get your game up with some noobs. Also get a spell checker bc your shit is hard to read and it just pisses people off.

v/Eyedentdy

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