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Old 07-18-04, 02:08 AM   #8
E Looch
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lil q- waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack dog ya bars are horrible ya flow is crap they way ya rhyme scheme is needs work everything u need to elevate on dog ya punchs are soft as a babys ass elevate

money

not to good either need some elevation work on ya rhyme scheme an punchs alot work more personals in ya verse

vote money

had a better verse this time around
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