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Old 07-18-04, 03:39 AM   #10
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ragance

dont be suprised when you read and yo eyes start to smoke
cause tha shit i spit is equivalent to a 1000 volts
->>decent opener

no comparin yo flow to mine i deserve a 1000 votes
revoke no need to be provoked you a joke
i had to spit first cause u would of probably choked
->>punches dont connect here

ya flow sound regurgatated mine the most anticipated
deservin a standin ovation be patient u will soon be congradulatin
->>kinda sounds like you thought of the rhymes then put in the filler words...doesnt read right

young e on a victory easy tookin u rap like u shookin
never face to face lookin u ll be cookin
->>second line was garbage...sounds like you thought of rhymes first again

u weak dont speak keep ya words in ya mouth
i dont feel ya shit like a kick from a mouse
->>wack closer


Revoke

your not on my level kid, your skills are going down a Bottomless pit
your a waksta so you can just quit with that thug shit
->>pretty good opener

its funny you think your ill you just caught the common cold
only way your catching attention is by puttin your verse in bold
->>haha

im not even on my 6th line and you know your done
add a loss to your record, its common where your from
->>filler

your not worth writing a verse with any sick punches
name you Fragrance cuz your known to spray wackness in bunches
->>filler

this battle is done must of swallowed your verse cuz you choked
and i left you without a chance and being the one who got revoked
->>not a good closer

I think Revoke took it because Eragance really fell off at the end and Revoke had some decent punches.

v/Revoke

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