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Old 07-18-04, 09:23 AM   #18
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alrite.. this was one sided... ema.. you need to add a bit of content in your rhymes, those lines were real short bro.. im guessin the 20 year old thing was a personal, but unless youve seen him you dont know if he suffers from acne, so theres no real truth behind your words.. the euro trash line was pretty good (prolly your best line) but it didnt rhyme with back so that sort of killed it.. umm quick... mom jokes are played as shit.. and saying u didnt need to swear really means nothing... u should really elevate a lot before you keep battling.

ok, hellrazor, first bar wasnt that bad.. 2nd bar your talkin about get ready.. should kinda already be right into the disses, but whatever, 3rd bar was pretty weak, no punchline at all. 4th bar, again no punchline, 5th bar, again no punchline, and no real diss at all, your sposed to be battling him not dissing all ya enemies at once lol.. and the closer was pretty weak, self glorification... also, its not really cool to say your a gangsta on the streets when your at home on the computer.. but whatever, its your style bro.. run with it..

im gonna give this vote to hellrazor, cuz the other guys rhymes were really weak.......but u both need to elevate... a lot...
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