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Old 07-18-04, 02:32 PM   #10
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From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
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This is my rhyme for you C-Explicit, (we already no that who else whould they be for?)
like skatin a 360 my flow will pivot (we rapping not skating, and y is you raps going in circles?)
You think you're a pro at this verse game (get to the point)
but when it comes down to it, your shit is lame (weak!)
Metaphors be pouring out of my brain (i ain't seen none)
like clouds be pouring rain. (they don't do it all the time)
Ill bottle up your sky and fuck you up (what does bottling the sky gotta do with killing?)
ill make thunder bolt and have you lightning struck. (what is a thunder bolt i heard of a lighten bolt but not a thunder bolt)
You're knees will wobble with homosexual fears (y your gay?)
as you dress up and grab the mic to imitate britney spears (only good line but bad closer)
2/10

Yo this kids a nazi… even if I was jewish.you still couldn’t merk me..* (nice personal but not an opener)
Ya rhymes are shit b.. Who the fucks ever heard of a german emcee.. (damn i love that)
Chicks into witchcraft and spells.. yet she couldn’t cast one to win this..* (fair but i don't like the hypelinks put in)
Cause your rhymes are wacker then ENERGY’s White Powder diss…* (i've never heard it so can't say what this line wheather good or bad)
You couldn’t spit ill if you were infected with the German Disease.. * (ok your played out the germany bit)
I’m beating you with ease.. the only position you in is on yo knees… (is hustler17 a girl if so good line if not thats a little weird)
Line 7?? Naw I don’t really need one.. cause this cats already done.. (true)
She’s been outdone..jus resort to smoking on my gun.. wun… (it was a more difined line of the one above^^)
No doubt..You souldn’t have accepted your crews call out.. (true)
You should jus type in “I QUIT” cause you ain’t winnin this bout.. (good closer)
7/10

winner c-explicit
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