newbs newbs newbs is that the only people you can beat?...
havnt logged in since sunday he runnin from a defeat.....
this was ight...personal was there
im not a newb so he must know that he shouldnt show...
if complaining to mods was good he'd finnaly be a pro!....
haha decent...personal was there decent punch
he shouldnt step up..ill smack him back to the ground...
he if he sits in all the shit he spits he would drown....
blah...it was ight i guess
i wish i had ten cents for evry time this kid looses....
its wendsay.. he scared now but b4 he was like...........
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Originally Posted by Gods son
checkin in nice..lets do this..
solid closer...set up was awkward tho but decent

ya flow was on point...had some decent punches and personals in there...overall it was ight....7/10

Shadow why you in RB you aint a man, you supposed to be up in Wendy Darlings drawer waitin for Peter Pan...Like Peters Home Ya Punch''ll Never Land, While U Just Cant Handle My Spits Like U Got A Fear Of Glands!!
Peter pan-neverland concept is very played...2nd line was ight..still played tho
C'mon son youre 14 years old ya mom dont want you cursin...J-poll put the battles up sunday and thats when you started rehearsin'...
punch and personal were ight..decent
512 POSTS? Somebody must get NO PUSSY, He on Rapbattles from NIGHT TO MORN//
Oh, I forgot, Mark is just a 14 YEARD OLD FAG JACKING OFF to POKEMON PORN(say it: PEE-ka-CHEEEWW!)lol
blah...punch was ight...personal was there
if you Winning that would be ODD, so im going to Beat you and make everything EVEN
make you ..26-3.. an PROVE you only ..HALF DECENT.. i may be givin you TO MUCH credit cause LOOKS can be decievin'
bar way too stretched...punch was pretty good tho nice and creative
Don't front me son, I'm Gods son giving you grace..I'm just a time bomb ticking and I'll be like your punches and blow-up in your face
blah...1st line set-up was ight...2nd line played and rather weak
I'm sorry kiddo youre gonna have to go back to 8 mile i know that thats your dream..but wait you cant see that its Rated R and youre only fourteen..
pretty decent closer...personal there but again just on his age

God u had some good punches...but ur structure and flow was whack (but i dont really care its text)...u had a lot of played lines tho and every personal u had was about his age...it really started to get repetitive...but some good creativity....6.2/10

Punches-Tie
Personals-Shadow...god focused on his age too much shadow at least had varying personals
Flow & Structure- Shadow
Creativity & Wordplay- God's Son
Originality-Shadow
Enjoyment- Shadow...cuz a lot of god's shit was played and got repetitive...

Overall- Shadow...hence the breakdown and categories....