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Old 07-18-04, 08:39 PM   #15
Know-Gimix
The Ups and Downs of Life
 
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you both came pretty tite--- heres my fav lines---

Prem- According to occupations…u been redundant for seven days….(profile)
Leader to ‘gods?’…well then heavens plagued by eleven gays - good flow- funny punch here.

I Own This kid Like the two letters in his sig, He's Now under New Management..
outwitted by a kid still In Junior High, Your reputation, Just Damaged-it..
Your lines, anerexic, droppin 1000 pounds of steel on your bars, crushin em completely..
When Prem spits, no fire is dropped like the U.s-N-iraq peace treaty.. - These lines and the "sound of success" and the preacher lines were pretty damn funny too-- I only read until the line limit to keep it fair but I think you had stronger bars in this-- your wordplay was pretty good and I think your punches were stronger... Vote State Capitol.
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