Da Prodigy:
Getttin punched with the punchline uh leave ya nose broke/
Leave ya nose soaked u beatin me iz uh hoax/
^nope...
Its not real bitch,yo flows imaginary/
yo rap game bout as real as the tooth fairy/
^played as hell...
Yo/in ma closet dats where i keep ma gage/
but instead of bullets i load it with uh lyrical page/
^filler...
2 beat this its gone take uh couple of days/
probably the amount between the arrival of J's/ (JORDANS)
^no...
like bitches wit aids/
ma flow uh give ya puub hairs uh fade/
^what happened to dissin ur opponent?
cuz ma lines aint old but wise lika sage/
an ma flow an metas interweave like braids/
^not dissin ur opponent
but u'll never get on ma level cuz u aint ma age/
^no...age has nothin to do with it..
So u might as well give it up cuz all ya metas iz 2 old/
Ma PUNCH-line count from 1 to 10 and always leave u K.O.ed
^no...
Schema:
this kid think he a genious so he just walk around hatin
he dont belong here yall just take a look at dogg's inspiration
^good punch...
dude needs a consolation prize...it hurts when you fail
"rook" i'll treat you like a "knight" and move you to your first "L"
^coo...worded horribly tho...
yeah youre ill...your so wack you make my stomach upset
your battle stats was empty cause you aint confronted me yet
^nah..not hard-hittin
yo i aint tryin to make a 3 page battle so i just made an example
you do too much noob shit for words but here's the voters a sample
^nah...ain't feelin it
this kid's a herb a lot of ways but this here is the most
just cause the board is free he thinks it means to fuckin freepost
^hehe...good one
so go rally your whole herb army...i know you the boss
cause anybody that know shit is gonna see you got tossed
^filler...
Overall: schema won this hands down. No further comments nedded. Prodigy...focus on dissin ur opponent more.
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