DarkLight

Shit, no femcee on this site sucks quite like RapMisstress
Leave her lyrically undressed, her rhyme spirit in distress
->>weak rhyme but ok

I whored her to the max, now she calls herself my bitch
Fuck, she ain't much of a sight to see, but good for a lick
->>haha

She prefers other hoes, at least she does somethin' right
Or maybe that's her flat ass in the av, even smaller in light
->>filler

I dropped a half-ass verse here to match the figure of yours
I leave ur body used and stretched, u'll catch rain in ur pores
->>pretty cool

I'ma finish this bitch, Mortal Kombat ain't got nothin' on this
Wanted to be whored on RB? Here bitch, u got ur wish.
->>good closer

RapMistress

Yo You's a bold muthafucka cuz you chose ta battle/
I see in ya profile that u play the piano/
->>weak opener

You ain't Alicia Keys you would neva be/
Even if ya voice was as deep as her's you'd still be weak/
->>liked the concept couldve been done better

But you only fourteen you ain't even seen puberty/
Nigga i'll sit you on my knee and breast feed you like a NEWBIE/
->>wack

You ain't on my level so ya bets ta commit suicide/
A bitch like me turn into Dr. Jekly and Ms. Hyde/
->>ok kinda played

In other words you couldn't even see how i was comin/
A bitch attack like the muthafuckin 50ft woman/
->>ok punch

So as I end this rememba one thing/
The only way you see light is if I let you keep livin'
->>rhyme? weak closer


my vote goes to darklight for overall better verse...mistress your structure was fucked and i think a lot of your punches hit weak.

hit this up honest http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135830

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