this is since im so weak..........
You should continue to battle newbs thats the only thing u do decent
the column for ya loses are steadily increasin
Ima lyrically demolish this foe, handlin all altercations
Vivid words will cause penetration, havin ya heart wastin
Im estimatin that at an approximation
of one spit i will leave this guys verse with deterioration
dawg you are humorusly overrated, constanly stimulated
by feed back based on exaggerration
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Originally Posted by Maku JaiiLiin
killah-nice opener.
If i see this nigga and he a block away
Im have his bitch ass doing tha rock away
i definately like the swagger about the line.
the problem is that because of the hot line it had me expecting more, and i'm afraid for the rest of the verse, you didn't deliver hard enough. over all it was a decent verse just not good enough to get over. props though.
v=supercilious
put an honest vote on my battle, it's linked below
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hot shit i spit man verbs are subliminal
claimin i won my last battle against him on visual