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Old 07-19-04, 12:50 AM   #11
Wordz AhGod
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kinda weak but I saw that Scrpt tried harder, Azz shouldnt stick to the whole gangster theme, Its aint wat hiphops about no more kid. Thats for niggaz wit out creativity. Just get creative and learn to use better punchlines that'll make niggaz remember U. Scripts closer was the best part of his verse, not just becouse it ment I didnt have to read any more of this shit, but he had a good punch in there. it was kinda played yeah, but mopping the floor wit someone always gets the job done.

Structure, A
Flow, S
Punches, S
Creativety, None
Multis, none
opener, none
closer, S

V/ Scriptious

I voted in this battle so could U please return the favor wit an honest vote in a battle in my sig. If U dont have 120 posts, then dont worry about the one wit OneManBand cuz it aint for U. any feed back is greatly appreciated. thanx
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