LyRiKaL19
I'm out for murder motherfuckers get prepared to go
Will kill any nigga leavin em cold in tha snow
->>weak opener
My whole objective in this game is to kill and show no pain
So what makes u think u can step to me ill shoot em up and bang bang
->>its alright
Down where I dwell, them boys ain't shit so motherfuck your crew
Bustin you like a pimple, takin your shit is so simple so wat u gon do
->>second line is stretched a little
Its do or die and bitch believe me I'm not tryin to go
You ridin on these, buster freeze, I got you and ya niggas beggin please
->>generic
I'm fuckin yo bitch, she suckin my dick, and it feels so good
I'm hittin that wood like you should when you leave my hood
->>weak closer
DaReTuRn
Here we go again, battling nother white wannab from michigan
i got your mom drikin uren, why ur over ther swallowing semen
->>played
if your say your good enough get produced then why are u loosing
you keep seducing your dog, the cum in your stoumics accumulating
->>loosing/accumulating?
Its do or die bitch are u ready, beacuase my rhymes are deadly
times over u cant run im about to slice you worse then the delly
->>kinda cool
your like a magnet to loosing, you cant avoid another defeat
now that this battles complete its time for your to retreat
->>didnt like the second line
i give it to dareturn by a hair...it was real close but he was a little more creative
hit this up honest
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135830