ok. pretty easy.. schema, your structure was a bit fucked at times, the 3rd line didnt rhyme in any bar.. punches were a bit weak all through, you rhymed shit with shit lol.. ..pretty weak verse.. but i dunno.. it wasnt amazingly bad..

MC DEATH, you bummed around a lot before u dropped which doesent score you any points, first bar didnt rhyme.. really shit opener, 2nd bar was self glorification (bad self glorification at that) 4th bar was prolly your best, you had a go at a multi and almost pulled it off, cept too many syllables, and the closer was only decent...

votes goin 2 schema... weak battle.. but he took it..

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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