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Old 07-19-04, 04:34 AM   #13
JPoll
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breakdown here it is...

valor first...

Valor
this dude looses battles then cry's and throws fits..
i didn't even know they let herbs in hardwood class-sickz..
7
lmao at this dude thinking hes ~A LETHAL VETRAN~..(user title)
ill leave this guy's brain fryed needin ill-legal EX-CEDRIN..(pain killer)
8
yo in this shit your wackness aint packin any heat..
you should ask anyone dude there aint no beatin me..
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its been a while homie wtf when the hell are u gonna be spittin..
and it's sad ur gonna loose and your verse is probably pre-writtin..
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now for ll...

LL
The only person that is gonna ~rest ya case~ is me *
As the Judge, I’m a prove you wack so now your guilty
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Uh huh okay now shut up before I cast ya dreams away **
Ok so your the jury and you can’t still put me away today ***
6.5
Wit rhymes or courage I’m still hittin you and ya crew ****
The ways you eva knew, ended up to come to hit you
4
Look at this cat thinkin he’s valor-able but he’s worthless *****
You can’t mess wit a cat that since birth-was-bless
4 where's the punch man...
Only thing you are to me is just another wack contestant
A shot to the stomach make your burn out into your intestant
5
It’s only the eleventh line and still I don't even need it
Ya try so hard to spit a verse that you actually bleed it
4

alright for obvious reasons vote valor...
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