Suggestion: Don't up so much, do what i do... Comment on other pieces you haven't commented on and drop a link... You're freeposting there buddy. Anyways.
I think this was just as good as the last one, and for the same reasons. The last 3-4 lines were the best of the poem. I would like to see more form you, but maybe something longer? 6/10
Return the Favor
Stranger At the Gates