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Old 07-19-04, 11:46 AM   #9
Paris Hilton666
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ok battle nottin special

AKA- you had some hard hittin punches my favorite line of yours was the first 4 lines those were the best you had some good personals and good structure
your verse was ok I would give it a 7/10

Xl- ok good to some personals but werak punches you talked about 9/11 which was wack etc etc your verse was kinda weak but at the same time ok
your overall verse was a 5/10

vote: AKA
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