Mistah tate merked this fool, wasn't even close... he had harder punches, better struc and flow, and better wordplay...

Intensity- Aight verse, wasn't too great tho. You had straight punches, but they didn't really hit too hard. Ya rhyme scheme was off, and ya opener didn't even rhyme. Also, some of ya lines didn't really make sense, or were just statements, like the " A town stomp" line, and your closer. Some of your lines were stretched, so just work on your struc and punches and elevate.

Mistah Tate- Nice verse from you, you had some hard hittin punches and nice wordplay. You had some nice personals, my favorite line was your opener, that hit hard. Your struc was on track too, which helps your flow. Good verse, i would just work on your complexity a little, but nice verse.