Both verses were ok,

Str8,..
U shouldv came a bit more complex. Plus Ur lines were kinda stretched a bit. U should work on Ur structure and flow.

Maku,...
Ur style was ok but U should also fix Ur structure and flow. Ur punches were a lil more complex then hoods. a bit basic but it shows Ur elivating. keep it up. U got my votes just based on punches alone.

V/ Maku JaiiLiin

P.s. please vote honestly in atleast one of the battles in my sig. It would be greatly appreciated.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..