mistah tate~damn, some funny lines in there, creative too, flow and structure were good throughout, ya had some good punches as well,good opener too, set upt nicely..overall nice verse
intensity effect: ya verse was decent too, but ya should clean up ya structure, it will help the flow,no hate just bein honest, try and pack more punches into a smaller space too cuz ya words get stretchy...overall good from both
VOTE:MISTAH

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