i have to say trajed'ee takes this one for flow.....ya verse just sounded better reading it and you had some good words/punches in there too...overall good verse
village:ya verse was too long man, and ya structure was kinda off, which messed up ya flow, but some decent punches as well.....keep at it
VOTE:TRAJED'EE

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