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Old 07-19-04, 02:03 PM   #8
fluidmoon
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thesinnister: ya had a nice flow, ya punches were good and hit hard, structure could use some work, but overall a good verse....
mcnotorious:ya verse was decent, but u needed to come a bit harder here, try working in some personals, but ya structure and flow was good.....
VOTE:THESINNISTER for overall punches
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