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Old 07-19-04, 02:17 PM   #3
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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Kil- I mean State Capitol...
Face Defeat, Treat My Gun Like A Pencil, turn it around and erase-this-geek..
Lines Aint Phrase-in-me,Im Ontop, your status is where my base-ment-be..
^nice multis but uhmm doesn't the first line say in more than 1 way that u'll kill urself..
sry i noticed that first.. ha ha.. ha ha..

u Aint Shine-in-kid, Road To Success Kine-da-dim, plus the fact ur letters glow in-ur-sig..
You spit Rhymes-of-sins (bad rhymes), Tried Out For dreamcast and got declined-a-gen
^ ur best lines.. ha ha nice punch, really..
*structurewise- okay, not too fucked up... *Wordplay- not bad *Vocab- alright..
overall: you didn't come too hard and fell off towards the end with the mama part..

Lethal Lunatic-
This cat thinks he’s hard cuz his scull is actually as thick as wood *****
He’s just shooked cuz he got hit wit a open shot like a pussy would
^ lol lol rofl lol... nice closer! ha ha

So let the cameras roll, your guest appearing in “faces of death” ***
your garbage, and you are what you eat, so your waste-in-your-breath ****
^ anotha good line, hee hee...
*opener: didn't stick to me at all... but i was feelin' how u started calm and started jappin' later.. ha ha *wordplay: good *vocab: both u and him the same..
*structure: you got that over him..

my vote: Lethal Lunatic both were funny but i felt LL punches flying and hitting his target State Capitol>urs wasn't bad but LL just came harder spillin' the truth..

LL> nice win
holla @ me when i get sum challengers.. (i have no open battles currently)
~wun~
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