ight-- I like some of the cats in D2R so I was kinda pullin for Papa but I just dont think it happened here--- heres my breakdown.


listen to me niggaz cause PAPPAs about to flow his shit like a pro...
this bitch messin wit D2R like her pussy ass didnt know,that we drop bombs fo sho -
weak opener, if flows but its weak you didn't really diss your opponnent it was more self glorification and you continued this through the entire verse, the hardest thing you said here was call your opponnent some names but nothin that sticks or stands out.


A "work in slow progress", ya rhymes elevate backward, you regress.......
Betta read "RB tutorials 101", textcee?, NO, just a newbie Relaunched regrets....
This is a better opener- I can see the wordplay in the first line, kinda funny punch-- I think your verse all in all was better you just need to work a little more on your punches and keep the rhyme scheme more intact (try and use multi-syllable rhymes at the end or rhymes that are easier for the listener to interpret)--- Your closer was kinda funny also- You had some personal info in your diss and I think you tried harder in this battle... Vote FluidMoon--- Return with an honest vote http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135403

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