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Old 07-19-04, 04:14 PM   #8
T West
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State CapiTol:
Face Defeat, Treat My Gun Like A Pencil, turn it around and erase-this-geek..
Lines Aint Phrase-in-me,Im Ontop, your status is where my base-ment-be..
^good use of multies...no hard-hitting punch though...

Lethal's 6-0, Kids Like An Overweight Vegetarian, He Only Eats Herbs..
This Bitch can't get a girl, only action you get is when you scream verbs..
^played out...

u Aint Shine-in-kid, Road To Success Kine-da-dim, plus the fact ur letters glow in-ur-sig..
You spit Rhymes-of-sins (bad rhymes), Tried Out For dreamcast and got declined-a-gen
^personal...yes...stretched as fuck...you needa shorten these lines down...too long=they don't hit as hard

Your Lines, I hit the back-space, kids white but fire lines will leave you with a black-face..
Leave your ass-baked, You Attract-fakes, bars aint affectin' me like You Rapped-blanks..
Blanks~face don't rhyme...your more focused about multies than you are about ur actual disses...

Merk Lethal, we far from equal, Make sure you don't make it to the final Seq-uel..
Weapons lethal, Your wackness has Been Exposed, Like The Media And Gay-people..
^decent...

your end-is-here, Your done now that your moms not here, to defend-your-rear..
your Mos' Def losin here, you aint goin nowhere like cars with no-gears..
^weak metaphor...

Lethal Lunatic:
Of course this is non of my business but how do you live this
Not even the famous D.R of RB can cure my pure sickness *
^not hard hitting...it is a personal tho...

This bitch thinks he can be like me, just cuz he quoted Jay-Z
The one that stopped him was a lethal diseased emcee which was me
^nope...atleast a personal tho

This bitch is so fruity he falls more times than the Niagara falls **
I came to destroy each State Capitol so I’m gonna annihilate all
^nah...atleast a personal tho...

You came out of 9 oh 5 and stepped in 9/11 wit my plans to blow
High jacked the second plane and now aimin for the State Capitol
^no...9/11 punches=played

So let the cameras roll, your guest appearing in “faces of death” ***
your garbage, and you are what you eat, so your waste-in-your-breath ****
^nah...weak...

This cat thinks he’s hard cuz his scull is actually as thick as wood *****
He’s just shooked cuz he got hit wit a open shot like a pussy would
^nah...its decent...but not good

Overall:...State capitol did use a lot of multies...but with stretched as fucked lines...they don't roll off the tip of your tongue when you read em...which really hurt that. Both didn't come with strong battle verses...but Lethal did have personals which does make his verse stronger.

/v- Lethal...barely won this.

Return the favour both of you, and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature. Thank You.
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