Premanition

its ironic that where you 'from' is where ur endin up....
'i shot u' in the head...n let ya blood drip into a cup....
->>pretty cool

bitch u came to rb....battle 3 newbs then think u can try me...
hardly....ur all about simplistic flow which will neva harm~me...
->>alright

u dis-arm me but my punches still improvise ur name...(i shot ya)
we both movin in directions...but the incline ain't the same....(up, down)
->>good punch

u remain a fuckin fag....
...so stuck in his ways, i offer him riches n he sticks with the rag...
->>no

to be honest i don't expect this kid to reply, but to no show n lie...
forced to sigh....wen i see him nominate himself 4 rookie of july....
->>ok closer



I Shot Ya

I drop bombs and spit demolition this boy premanition just doesn’t know
he doesn’t listen his ambition is slowly driftin listen to snoop and lay low
->>wack opener

you reminiscin about your wins pay attention i pick up the pen and it wont happen again
My flow makes you sick its destroyin your colon call me the sheriff cuz this site im patrollin
->>crazy stretched it just doesnt flow well

You hate to see me cuz my paper is foldin I’ve been on this rap shit so long my pen is moldin
I keep slugs that break thugs down to little boys you take drugs to keep up and i aint talkin ecstasy
->>wack

You pussy ass bitch spelled ya name wrong 10 lines then im gone dont hurt yaself tryin to keep up wit me
your rhymes are crap you dont know how to rap talk shit i put a hole like a hula hoop in ya baseball cap
->>^^^

I dont play matter fact i fight with hands i dont need to Tek get ya girl throat stretched like a flamingos neck
You dont want drama cuz ill fuck ya girl in the back of my jeep step to me you get chipped up like Fabolous teeth
->>^^^

Prem this battle was one sided....I shot ya youre putting like 2-3 bars in each line its hard to read and annoying. Work on making your lines 12-15 syllables and putting ounches in them without just rambling on and on. Go read the tutorial shit really helped me out.

v/Premanition

\/return the favor\/

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