For$aken

shit kid you acting like the shit but I ain't see nothing yet~
you couldn't smoke my ass not even if you lighted a cigarette~
->>decent opener

I'm surprised you claimed a title on another stupid ass site~
it couldn't be a hot spot if it was completely in the light~
->>not feelin it

you just recently joined and you going up against a damn pro~
hmm. boi your rhymes are still flat you remind of a plateau~
->>its ok

you say you killing emcee's and at the same time doing beats~
your tracks couldn't imitate me... if the shit was on repeat!~
->>decent

your so lucky i'm going easy on you because your unknown~
you rhymes still couldn't beat me if it was twice postponed~(post twice...)
->>kinda funny because he did post twice

bklynafc2004

o.k doogie u want to battle ur better off to sue me
i been calling people out since i been on
so it's ur turn to move me i'll smoke u like a loosely
->>second line? get out of here you gotta elevate

im join this battle dog but i know u can't spit
im a battle u while my girl sucking my d*%$#@
->>weak

my girl still giving me neck
while my fingures damaging the keyboard
->>rhyme?

never forget im the beast in the peace
still growing like yeast first u wanted the war
now u yelling out peace thats alittle extra for u lol
->>wackk

\/not counting this its past 5 bars\/
aight dog i got to admit u are tight
but it aint the sh*#@t u need to quit
im on ur site spitten that bright light
and the matck aint even lit
i send kites for the hit keeping the flows lock like a pit
but ur the dog and i'll tell u when to sit
im up on here no crew at all
urs judging the battle but ur still taking a fall
i black out when i brawl u computer thug
i'll shut ur whole hard drive wit my hardcore
and i can peep that ur soft come bring ur leader
cause turned out to be no match at all



bklyn first of all i seriously doubt you won a title at another site...theres no shame in being new all you gotta do is elevate. 5 bars is 10 lines he even explained it and you didnt get it. you posted 3 times? you only get once.

Forsaken didnt come particularly hard but he really didnt have to easy vote

v/Forsaken

\/hit my shit up honestly\/

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