hahhaha God Son Holy Shit the fuckin Multi's And Punches were bangin HARDDDD....lol......this shit was nice..only thing you need to fix up is your structure....your best line was:
I'm about to eat you up type nice Like ''Stoves'' U can ''Stew-On-This-Spit''/ Cuz Your rhymes suck & "Bout As Gifted" As A "Jew-On-Christmas"!!


lol that ahd me laughin for a while...and sick set up...that was sum real nice shit

opener: your opener was crazy good multi's 8/10
closer: again nice flow and nice multi's 7.5/10
vocab: your vocab was bangin hard 8/10
Multis: multi's was fuckin crazy here 9/10
Punches: punches were also bangin real hard 8/10
personals: didnt see too many personals 4/10
structure: your structure was ok.. 6/10
flow: flow was fuckin crazy aswell: 9/10

overall: that shit was mad crazy fuckin sick

durmil: your shit was decent....good structure and flow..but only thing is...lot of those rhymes are played..but this shit was still fiya..i was feelin it

opener: your opener was decent 6/10
closer: wasnt feelin da closer dat much 5/10
vocab: your shit was pretty basic 6/10
Multi's: multi's....you lacked multi's 4/10
Punches: your punces were ok 7/10
structure: that was ur strongest point 8/10
flow: your flow was decent 6/10
personals: personals were ok..didnt see too many 6/10

overall: nice shit but ur shit was played...and sum was basic...good try thuogh

vote: god son

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