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Old 07-19-04, 07:23 PM   #14
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prodigy your verse was pretty awfull talkin bout triggas n holes in slippa's,you had decent structure "that was good"opener was weak,your closer was terrible,it did'nt ryme.........slugga your verse needs better structure,but you were tryin ta get personal which is good,you had the better verse cause of creativity but you both need ta elevate,go'luck.........
vote/SLUGGA
return the favour n ill add the vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135134
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418