SLUGGA: to be honest I wasn't liking your drop much at all............
flow was lacking but it went off at times in the battle which I wasn't
liking.....punches weren't that hard hitting but that's ok................
original was not there at all .................effectiveness
was you worst category as I said it didn't really hit him hard........
also you had no personals and thats a no-no that makes people
think its prewritten.....and tips......don't rhyme about his mother
because thats a played-ass concept seriously......................


WillNova: your verse to me only was just average not all special......
flow was there and the syllable count was good in counting.............
punches were ok but typing about parents and shit is not required
that fucks verses up...........seriously!........................... ...............
original was lacking aswell due to the parent concept........................
effectiveness was working for awhile but it all went downhill for a while..
personals none suspect of pre-written......................................


overall: due to much better flow and being tied in every other
category excluding punches..................so my vote goes to WillNova..

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