Envee....
Not feelin the beat. It's used an commercial you know? You had ok flow and ok delivery. decent emotion. Your lyrics where kinda of funny.
work on the flow an delivery. no hate. 5/10

Limited....
I hate that beat. No offense. It was annoyin lol. Your lyrics were good. Problem was you could hardly hear them. And you didn't ride the beat that well. I think it was the beats fault...not ur tho. You should have used a differant beat. make your voice louder and try not to sound like your reading so much. no hate. 3.5/10

Vote/Envee
The quality and delivery win this one.

(limited-just work on what I told ya. You can IM me for help anytime.-1)