Almighty

I don't wanna hear no gangsta stuff in this free cuz yo shitty keep those lyrics 2 yourself cause u play 2 much vice city//
->>i can already tell your biggest problems are structure and flow...this was a dope idea but keep it 12-15 syllables this is like at least 2 lines

now plz tell me how many battles u been in cuz if u played pocket pool wit urself u still wouldn't be winnin //
->>way stretched but cool concept

these are lyrics that you'll never know u practice suckin dick wit miracle whip and a dildo//
->>stretched

this is one great battle that u cannot spit ur dad bust in ur eye so now u rockin a patch like slick rick//
->>filler

if iwere u i wouldn't want 2 b in that situation there are other ways besides gay porn that could get money makin//
->>gay talk is played unless its creative

trigga matrix thinks he's got a safe spit but doesn't realize that if he tries to dodge bullets he's one dead bitch//
->>wasnt feelin it

knowin that im goin and flowin wit such eazehow do you cease 2 believethat uv'e met the mc that could kill u wit jus flow head 2 toe cuz i'm the Almighty
->>theres books shorter than this



Trigga Matrix

kill this bitch almighty with easy ill intentionz//
rip your organs out so you can see all your Connections//
->>pretty cool i thought

wrap a rope around your neck just to see you get Strangled//
cut your eyes out and hang them..so you can see your ass Dangle//(get it)
->>ok

if i gave you the mic what would be your Statement//
it would be just as poor as me not telling you i Buried you family under your basement//
->>second line stretched bad

this is pretty poor that i gotta leave you sonned in one thread//
i'm sorry if they said rap was easy as sucking dick you really got miss-lead//
->>generic

well i gotta go this was a fast verses//
any anything is good for beating this newibe even gunit101 verses//
->>weak closer


Almighty I can really see that verse as being sick if it flowed so I hate to give Trigga the vote but I have to...I cant vote for a verse that has no flow or structure. I think when you elevate and get your lines right well be seeing osme good stuff from you but youre not there yet.

v/Trigga Matrix

\/hit me up \/

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